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IELTS Essay,topic: Should wealthy nations share their wealth?

Shouldwealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations byproviding them with things such as food and education? Or is this theresponsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after theircitizens?

I think that wealthy nations should be required to share theirwealth with poorer nations. But their helping should only stop atproviding such things as food and education because of the three followingreasons.

Firstly, citizens of both wealthy nations and poorer nations are humanbeings. Therefore, we can not look at, hear of, or talk about people who lackfood, education, etc… without compassion and sympathy. Sharing wealthwith poorer nations is not only a good deed but is also a task .

Secondly, many nations in Africa and Asia are very very poor.Famine, diseases, crime and illiteracy are killing the citizens of thesecountries. In the contrary, many nations in Europe and America are too rich.If there are no actions taken, this inequality will increase dramatically. Poorcountries will become poorer while rich countries will become richer. Asa result, the poorest countries will become slaves of the richest countries.So, sharing wealth is an useful way to prevent people from that badfuture.

Thirdly, although sharing wealth with poorer nations is very necessary but thishelp should only stop at providing such things as food, medicine and education.Or else, poor nations may become dependent on the aid. They may lose enthusiasmto build their countries by themselves. Moreover, rich nations can takeadvantage of sharing wealth to interfere with the governance of poor nations’.This can’t be considered a humane action and should be prevented.

In my opinion, sharing wealth with poorer nations has both a bad side and a goodside. What we have to do is avoiding its bad side and practicing itsgood side.

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