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TopicChildren and rules.


In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?


Freedom plays a pivotal role in everybody’s life. We can see in today’s modernised era that nobody likes to be restricted, whether it is a child or an adult. Some people think that there should have some strict rules of behaviour for children, but I disagree with this statement.


Wherever it is a reality that sometimes more restrictions can cause more frustration in children, which leads to many other mental problems as well. Moreover they can be, behave like a stubborn. Sometimes they feel themselves under pressure, which can be the main reason for their poor performance in their field. In some cases children may insist on doing these things from where we? try to keep them away.


In other words, we have to look for other aspects as well, like if we usually ignore our children’s bad habits, then they can’t be good human beings in their future life. Moreover, if we never draw attention upon the children’s main activities then they might end up in a bad company. They can know regarding the value of respect for their elders. They can know the importance of relationships. They can know regarding their cultural values as well.


In a nutshell, I would like to say that children should be teach the value of their customs, rituals and respect towards their elders for their future life, but most of the additional restriction should be being avoided. It would be better to make them good human beings in their future.



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