2015澳洲游洋出品
---视频教师：杨琳（雅思教龄14年）
大家对照以下笔记，应该会更清楚些。视频配套对照，文字整理部分: 写作6.5到底这0.5差在哪里了？
第一部分
—skill/ability, acquire/obtain, adequate/sufficient
They tend to become independent(整个句子强调的重点), which is an important element in academic studies and research. This independence… I win, and therefore feel happy.必须使用and I win, therefore feeling happy. 没有and, 需要后面动词改为doing
Natural characteristics and the experiences in life are interacting. This interaction shapes a person’s personality. Children experience working and living with different people. This experience encourages them to learn how to interact with others.
Children paid work—work experience观点偏题 Selfish, greedy, return to traditional values—conservatism保守，论据太主观，不客观。 Traditional buildings的优缺点—modern building的理由段，完全跑题。
边听边看笔记，应该马上可以记住
第一部分：the的使用说明
the world, the Internet, the environment 固定单词，往往表示独一无二 the boys in the room; those people who 名词后方出现修饰短语和从句 Children are punished. The(上文提到过) children do not obey rules. Children are punished. The behaviors（上文提到过） are often socially unacceptable.
许多：many(修饰可数名词) much(修饰不可数名词) 大多数：the majority of(修饰可数名词) much of(修饰不可数名词)
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