雅思写作6和7的差距,居然是..

2016年12月02日 最西澳




  You opened this post. ..


I know you must have got another band 6.


The story below will help you figure out what is wrong with your writing :D



There are 2 kids,  let's see what made them different


At the beignning of their preparation



Wooooo… F* a lot of questions !  Where to start ?

Should I memorize all example essays ?

I feel so  overwhelmed !



Structures first, then phrases and ideas.

Just  need to use ideas to fill in the blank.

Great. I am very confident.





After 2 weeks, you practiced 1 essay


I have memorized lots of examples,

why did I still get 6 ?

Have no F* idea what is wrong.

Keep practicing.


Band 6. I am ok with this.

I know how to improve :D

Look at my evaluation sheet :D ,

I need to improve grammar and lexical.



After 4 weeks, you are trying to improve







 

After  6 weeks,

all of you are exhausted, want to give up



I have finals, part-time job,

feel so stressed out,

Let me take a break !



Deadline is coming, I feel pressured.

Let's talk with Yvonne for some motivation :D






So, what take you from  band 6 to 7 ?


Is it " hard-work" ?


Yes, you study 10 hours / day,


but did you really work on the essentials ?

Do you really know what is wrong with your essays ?

Is it grammar ? phrases ? or vocabulary ?


What is your study plan ?


Yes, you registered another test,

then another one..

but how many of you are confiden that you can get a band 7 next time ?


When you want to give up,

who do you go for ?

Do you ask for help or figure out yourself?



So, what take you from  band 6 to 7 ?


1. a set of effective  method



2. constant reflection and adjust



3.You have someone to reply on


when you want to give up




Can you do this alone ?


if you can, why you are still stuck ?



 



So,let me help you


I am Lynn, I am the future version of you.



IELTS fucked me a loooot !


2014,before coming to Australia to study,

I took the F* test sooo many times

Everytime, band 6



 2012 年5月10日:写作6分

第N次6,整个人处于颠风状态







16天以后

2012年5月26日:写作7分


Eventually, I found the trick.

got a band 7 in only 16 Days

Then, I  said " fuck off" to those who told me it is impossible to get a band 7 in 3 weeks.


Do not give a F* of those who said you cannot do sth. They are shits.

That is why they want you be like them ! Results show everything !


Now, you know why I want to help you :D


I just cannot see you going through my pain again ! The pain not only from the score,

but those " You just cannot do that" from friends or family.

Those people .. you know..we all have 1 or 2 ..


So I created kissielts.com after I graduated from Master of Teaching, Melbuorne university, to help more.


I created one free course, then another one..

Now you can find 3 free courses on my website: kissielts.com


1.雅思写作7天免费课程,1个月1次

2.11 Tiny lessons, 每天邮件课程,每天5分钟,击败拖延症

3.预测课程,每周十篇范文精讲



My bullshit version bio


Master of Teaching,Melbourne University

曾经16天从雅思写作从6提高到7分,雅思写作8分,总分8.5

10年英语教学背景,先后在EF,无忧雅思授课,教授GMAT,GRE阅读,雅思听说读写

中国唯一Certified Tiny Habits Coach,利用行为学,帮你改掉拖延症

Tinyhabits,是斯坦福大学教授BJ -Fogg 创办的最有效的行为改变体系


I am sharing this post here coz we are in the same crew, we worked F* hard at uni to graduate, to find a good job. We have to do multiple jobs while working while preparing for IELTS !! Then those "friends"  in Mainland China would say " 你都出国这么久,雅思还没过? 怎么可能?“  

你们TM知道我们过得是什么生活? 怎么毕业的!

Final的时候每天3-4点睡,怎么有时间复习!

毕业又要工作!


So,I really hope that this FREE course can help you

reduce some stress,

save some time :D


雅思写作7天免费课程

网络课程,任何时间地点都可以收看

12月2日-12月8日

你可以直接到kissielts.com 注册收看课程

但是,我建议大家加助教的微信,进入微信群

因为,微信群会组织21天签到,送范文讲解课程,作文批改课程等活动

我希望在2016年的最后30天,帮你形成 Tiny habits, take actions


助教微信




My wechat for Q&A :D



课程主要内容:


我是如何16天获得写作7分 ABC+Recipe 方法讲解

40组ABC词组下载

4组Recipe


学习步骤:



. 理解abc+recipe 的方法,视频概要






2. 学习如何审题


3. 应用idea map 想出分论点







4. 40组abc词组的视频解释!很重要







5.背诵abc词组








7. 每节课配合测试题目(监督你的学习进度)







8. 每天都会收到一封免费课程配套的作业邮件,监督你完成作业




 

Whenever you want to give up 


Always remember you are not alone 


My wechat for Q&A :D




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