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雅思大作文结尾段技巧

 

雅思大作文的开头写的很漂亮,那必然也要有一个精彩的结尾。虽然雅思作文的分数并不是取决于结尾段落,但是一个漂亮而干脆的结尾段还是会对TR的分数产生一定的影响,把大作文的分数拿到最高。

今天,无忧小雅哥和悉尼雅思姐今天拿两个无忧内部的高分范文的例子,教给大家两招写Conclusion的方法!~为下周或者下下周的考试做好冲刺的准备哦!



招式一:

  • 回答问题 Answer the question 类型

例题:2016年3月19日澳洲考区A类大作文考题

Nowadays, consuming products are much cheaper than they used to be. Do you think the advantages overweight the disadvantages?

范文:

In conclusion, I personally believe that whilst accessibility to cheaper items is a plus, compensating their quality will only lose suppliers consumers.  Therefore, the advantages of having affordable consumer products outweigh the disadvantages. 

【题目中问的是advantages是否outweigh disadvantages,作者在conclusion段落给出了自己的观点:对于消费者的accessibility是好处,但是质量问题只会缺失部分的客户而已。所以,好处其实是大于坏处的。这样就完整回答了题目中的问题,在解析了advantages和disadvantages后,给出outweigh的答案。】


 

招式二:

  • 概括全文,重申观点 类型

例题:2016年2月20日澳洲考区A类大作文考题:

Some people think that the best way to solve traffic problem is to build better train system, but others think that the best way is to build more roads. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文:

In conclusion, increasing traffic problems are a concern that must be solved, but the environmental benefits that accompany the efficiency of trains outweigh the effectiveness offered by building more roads. 

【结尾段,作者重申了自己的观点,也就是——roads 并不是解决交通阻塞的the best way,作者认为build more train systems才是更好的方法。这篇文章中,作者先是各用一段描述了题目中提到的两个观点,然后再用一个段落给出了自己的观点。在conclusion段落再次重申自己全文的观点,这也是一个不错的结尾段写法哦!】

注意:结尾段不要再出现新的信息,只需要总结概括前文中提到的观点,回答题目中的问题即可。

*这两篇文章的范文,在墨尔本无忧雅思的官方微信和微博中都可以查询的到全文哦!

一般在结尾段最开始的部分,大家就应该考官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解到文章已经进入尾声了。大家可以参考使用下列结尾段的套句哦!

注意,大家最好不要用in a word这个词组,除非你是真的打算只用一个词来写结尾段哦!


信号词:

Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall


句型:

  1. It can be concluded that…

  2. We can find that…

  3. I think it is also important to remember that…

  4. The main point is to make sure that…

  5. I believe that…

  6. Personally…

  7. I would say that…

  8. My view is that…

大作文的introduction很重要,conclusion也不能草草了事哦!想要TR和CC得高分,就要注意每一个细节哦!~


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