【流程图写作秘籍】 雅思写作流程图写作指导 Catherine老师 写作VIP7分小班 5月25日开课

2015年05月19日 7PLUS英语


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很多考生非常害怕看到雅思作文中的流程图题型,一旦作文考到流程图就不能很好的发挥出应有的水平。但事实上只要把握流程图写作的要领,流程图写作是很容易攻破的。

1. 找到流程图的过程,起点,终点。

2. 找到图上标出的已知动作,如果出现生词,尽量猜测。无词,用自己的语言。

3. 按照步骤,分段描述,千万不能省略任何一步。

4. 切记!加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。

5. 句型以主动为主,搭配被动,以及主语从句。(例如:It can be seen from the graph that...)

6. 时态要使用一般现在时。


例文分析:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Writeat least 150 words.

The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词:process整个过程;stage阶段;step步骤

Chocolatecomes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa andIndonesia.【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree,而是通过主题词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突】

【流程图特点之一:介绍过程要使用一般现在时】

【流程图特点之二:大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句话连接。】

【流程图特点之三:大量使用被动语态】Thetree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.

【流程图特点之四:使用一些表示顺序的连接词】Firstly, when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans areremoved and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.【三个句子的并列:“句子A, 句子Band 句子C”。】

Duringthe fermenting process, the beans turn brown.

【流程图特点之五:要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度,千万不要加上自己的主观观点,否则会扣分】

Next,the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacksand transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to achocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between250 and 350 degree Celsius.

Afterbeing roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This partis not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean ispressed and liquid chocolate is produced.

【流程图特点之六:一般不需要写总结】

以上就是雅思作文流程图写作的一些技巧,最后再总结一下流程图的特点:①务必现在时;②多用定语从句;③多用被动语态;④巧用顺序词;⑤适当添加;⑥无需总结;相信考生们在了解之后对症下药一定能够突破雅思写作流程图这道门槛的。


流程图常用词汇:

  

时间阶段: Aftera period of ..months/days/minutes, during…

  

顺序连词: First,first of all, in the first stage, initially, to begin with

Second, then, next, also

After that, at the same time, in the meantime, meanwhile

Prior to, until

the first stage involves … / in the second stage / in the thirdstage /

in the last stage//The next step in the stage is that….

  

目的连词: inorder to / in order that; so as to / so that

  

常见动词:

Produce生产, lay放置,put, accumulate积累 gather / collect / 收集obtain获得, Heat up加热expand膨胀bend弯曲turn off关闭cool down冷却disconnect断开连接spin旋转, 纺,strike打击,Compress压缩,, release释放,expand膨胀move, flow流动, accelerate加速, form形成, Press按压,adjust调整, absorb吸收, form形成,process加工, Rotate旋转, chop坎,grind磨(碎), 碾(碎), Light点燃, burn燃烧,ignite点燃, Reflect 反光, turn 转,starts开始stops结束records录音turnsup调高turns down调低,winds缠绕unwinds解开revolves旋转(spin, rotate)fold折迭unfold打开reverse颠倒,倒转Adapt 适应 adjust 调整alter 改变cure 治愈 disappear消失dissolve溶化,解散exchange 交换expand扩张, 膨胀 fade 退色increase增长promote促进, 升职reduce 减少renew使更新,使恢复renovate革新,更新,修复replace取代swell肿胀switch改变 transform:完全改变 vary改变swap:交换shrink 收缩, melt溶解heal治愈,cure 治愈form/come into being/take shape 形成produce 生产 /gain /get/ acquire 获取 evaporate 蒸发/volatilize 挥发 draw 提取/ recycle 回收/extract 拔/ absorb 吸收 /collect/ 收集 meet 相遇 / be made up of/由。。。组成 be made of由。。。制成/ be made from 由。。。制成 /feed on 以。。。为食/depend on /rely on 依赖 /release/send out 释放/sort分类 /separate 分开 conveyed 运送cutinto 切成 poured into 倒入poured into 倒入a heated 加热 melted into 融化成flows into 流入



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教师简介:


Catherine老师


前北京环雅写作口语名师,墨尔本大学教育学博士在读。7年雅思教学经验,美国IDEA国际英语辩论赛十大最佳辩手,人事部口译三级,英语专业八级。在职期间,成功帮助低分同学去的理想分数,基础良好同学取得8分高分。在她的教学中,结合中外TESOL教育理论,耐心负责,及时了解雅思动态。口语授课注重学生逻辑思维,写作注重学生结构,语法等细节,是你突破雅思拿高分的不二选择!



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