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你想写出下面的论证段落吗?


论证政府是否要支持少数民族语言


For one thing, we use language as a medium to express thoughts and ideas, which reflects our identity, distinguishing us from others. ( Exp)


Languages are used by minority groups in singing, dancing, poetry to record their cultural characteristics and communicate them with others.


For example, it is mainly through different languages that various aboriginal tribes in Australia have their unique ways of self-expression about their traditions, customs and beliefs. (Eg)


If their languages had disappeared, their identity would have been impaired.



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雅思写作讲座( 了解课程整体内容) 60 mins

Lesson1: Task2 作文结构 30 mins

Lesson2: 百搭开头结尾模版 30 mins

Lesson3: Topic sentence 模版句 30mins

Lesson4: 7.5分论证模版 30mins

Lesson5: 针对Lesson 4的巩固语法练习 30mins

Lesson6: a-b-c 核心词讲解+题目答案 30mins

Lesson7: 如何将a-b-c 套入Lesson4的模版,写出7.5分段落 15mins-30mins



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课程具体内容:


Lesson1: Task2 Argument Agree/Disagree 题目结构


Lesson2: 百搭开头结尾模版


多种开头结尾表达方式,任你选择。


请不要再写Due to the development of .. (太俗了..)


可以写:


Our society has been witnessing ..trend of …


Lesson3: Topic sentence 模版句


表达” pros” and “ cons” , important, solve problems 的百搭句型

比如: solve problems 可以写成reverse this trend..


Lesson4: 7.5分论证模版 链接结构

将核心词a-b-c 链接起来的模版 ( 请看L5对于a-b-c的解释)

比如上面段落的模版是:

For one thing, we use language as a medium to express thoughts and ideas, which reflects our identity, distinguishing us from others. ( Exp)

a ( 完整句子), which b, c ing


后面的举例子,我使用了 强调+第三条件句。


这个结构可以用来论证所有题目


Lesson5: 针对Lesson 4的模版,巩固语法练习


“第二条件句 ” 和“第三条件句” 的区别

上面段落的后两句,我使用了第三条件句.


如果之前发生..a,现在就会..c


Lesson6: a-b-c 核心词讲解+题目答案


重点讲解20组文化类的a-b-c 核心词组:

a-b-c 是把一个论点展开的 “ 逻辑词组“

满足下面要求:

1.a发生,b发生,c发生的时间顺序

2.动词+名词 词组

3.动词的精准度 ( 不是高大上)


上面段落的a-b-c 词组是:


a: use language as a medium to express thoughts and ideas ( medium 媒介)

b: reflect our identity ( reflect 就是熟词巧用)

c: distinguish us from others ( 和其他人区别开)


Lesson 7: 如何将a-b-c 套入Lesson4的模版,写出7分段落


将L6的词组套入L5 写出你自己的段落:)




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