传说中的Pie Chart 该怎么写？
不要以为Task 1 的Pie chart是很难搞定的一种图表类型，其实它和其他几种图表无异，都有一定的写作方法，只要掌握了正确的写作方法，想要像这位学生一样写出7.5分的小作文，真的不是难事哦！
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Word Count:
175 words, minimum required 150;
The word limit is appropriate – good work! Always try keeping the word limit from 150-180.
Task Response – Well done
You have reported most of the important results – good work.
Coherance & Cohesion – Well done
You have made some good use of cohesive devices and your ideas flow in a logical order in general– good job!
Try incorporating a conclusive cohesive device such as ‘overall’.
Lexical resource – Very Good – Well done
As such the vocabulary is very good, but make sure you use your words distinctly and do not make too many repetitions. Please note the usage of ‘disbursements’/ ‘spending’.
Try to incorporate some sophisticated vocabulary, such as ‘rose’/’peaked’ instead of ‘went up’.
Grammar & Accuracy – Very Good – Well done
A good variety of structures is used with simple and complex sentences with just a few grammatical errors – good work!
Overall this task 1 deserves a 7.5 band – keep it up!
读完了这整篇文章，是不是发现所谓的大词难词并不多，大多都是一些比较基本的表达，而且语法上也没有特别 “绚丽” 的用法，但却足以构成一篇7.5分的A类小作文。所以大家不需要对Pie Chart有恐慌心理，照着方法写下去，用清晰明了的写法即可~
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