我给10个朋友发了这个PTE作文模板,结果Written Discourse全部满分!

2017年02月15日 墨尔本校园微报


PTE大作文不用练,背个好模板考场直接来,就能得高分?


这真的不是一个传说,Write essay,让PTE变成了雅思和无数考生之间的小三。

这也难怪,因为它实在是太可爱了。

它不歧视模板,并且有参考价值极高的题库,让无数被雅思击碎的7分梦想瞬间照进现实。


比如,我有一个模板,介绍给很多小伙伴被用了无数次,几乎每个人written discourse和grammar小分都是高分!


 但是,还是有很多学生失足掉入了下面的两个大坑,因此挂了PTE写作。

 

1.     华丽丽的使用一个自己都看不懂的模板。

2.     看到题目没思路,果断写跑题。


 

今天咱们就来说说模板的问题。


模板是灵魂!

一个好的模板应该做到:语法精确、逻辑清楚、字数过百。

有了一个好模板之后,写PTE大作文简直像完形填空一般得心应手有木有。

而并且,grammar & written discourse的分数刷~刷~刷~就上去了。

 

废话不多说了,上模板:

Introduction:

These days, there is an ongoing debate about (主要争论点). While it is possible to claim that (让步), my view is that (自己的观点). In this essay, I would explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.

 

First paragraph:

On the one hand, there are several solid reasons why (中心词、词组、短语) are considered to be advantageous. One of them is that (第一正面论点). Also, it should be taken into account that (第二正面论点). Moreover, it can also be argued that (第三正面论点,根据字数选择删加).

 

Second paragraph:

On the other hand, those who argue against (中心词、词组、短语) hold a different view. Firstly, it is claimed that (第一反面论点) Then, there are concerns about (第二反面论点).

 

Conclusion:

In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, I firmly believe that (自己的观点,区别于第一段,换一种方式表述).


怎么用?来,上例题:

In education system, assessment through formal written examination still valid?

 

These days, there is an ongoing debate about (whether written exams still valid or not). While it is possible to claim that (written tests are not always the best way to assess learning), my view is that (this evaluation method still needs to be adopted). In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.

 

On the one hand, there are several solid reasons why (written exams) are considered to be advantageous. One of them is that (formal written exams are the most effective and efficient way to evaluate students’ learning progress on a regular basis). Also, it should be taken into account that (sometimes written exams can create competition among test-takers, which would push them to do their best).

 

On the other hand, those who argue against (written exams) hold a different view. Firstly, it is claimed that (exams are likely to be biased because they only judge a students’ ability under set conditions and limited time). Then, there are concerns about (the stress caused by written exams, which will damage a student’s mental health).

 

In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, I firmly believe that (written examination is still an indispensable part of the current education system).



特别提示

1.     写到200字出头就好,写到250+纯粹是折磨自己,不但不多给分,反而会增加出错的几率。

2.     PTE大作文写作一共20分钟的时间,尽可能在15分钟左右写完,然后检查一下拼写。

3.     替换一些出现频率较高的词,避免大范围出现重复的词汇。

4.     打字速度一定要提高,千万不要别人盲打不看键盘,咱们盲打不看屏幕。


 

再来说说写作没思路的这个问题。


和雅思不同的是,PTE的题库非常有限,原题重现几率极高。所以只要将真题库里的题目都看一遍,将main ideas罗列出来,问题就迎刃而解了。

 

好消息是,较瘦我已经将真题库以及每一个题目对应的main ideas都为你整理好了,需要的话,就扫码找我来拿吧。

学习PTE常见问题:

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Retell Lecture完全听不懂?

女生Pronounciation总是低于40分?

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