雅思7分写作班分析段落写作逻辑

2016年10月28日 环球雅思墨尔本分校


段落是构成文章的因素,本文雅思7分写作班就来为大家分析下如何写好段落。

  段落是由句子按照一定逻辑构成的,而句子是由具有意思的词、短语按照一定逻辑构成的。为此,雅思7分写作班首先要讲的就是意群和逻辑。

  看下面的几个公式(注解:A/B/C分别代表意思的小群体(简称意群),经常由动宾或系表结构,具有动词或形容词意思的名词或者名词短语,或者从句或者独立的句子构成。)

  第一个逻辑公式:A—C。在雅思7分写作班上曾给童鞋们举过这个例子:如果谦虚聆听长者见解,年轻人就能够很快的通往成功道路。因为很多宝贵的经验(如少说话多办事、多学些技能等)会大大地减少那些缺乏相关经验、判断能力很差的年轻人犯错误的可能性,进而可以少走很多弯路。

  Listening to traditional ideas from senior citizens, those who are young are probably guided to the right path of success. Doing more and saying less, as well as acquiring more skills are part of the elderly’s precious experience. All of them are more likely to reduce the probability of committing mistakes by young people, who usually lack in such experience and ability to judge right from wrong, and then the young can get success as soon as possible.

  第二个逻辑公式:A—B。雅思7分写作班老师再举个例子:现代务农方式的使用能够很大程度的提升农产品的产量。例如,不像过去要知道那个时候大量农业活动都是依靠传统人力和牲畜滴进而农业产量相对很低,当前这几十年,中国的很多农产品的产量已经大幅度提升,就是因为大量滴水灌溉技术、化肥农药等广泛合理地运用。这一定程度上不仅为消除饥饿、贫困做出了贡献而且也拉动了社会经济发展。

  Raising the yield of agricultural produces by a large margin is the primary and fundamental explanation. As is known to all, not as before when farming activities mainly relied on humankinds and livestock and the output of agriculture was lower relatively, recent decades have witnessed a sharp increase in the output of crops like corns and grains and fruits such as apples and bananas, in China, thanks to the extensive and reasonable exploitation of drip irrigation, chemical fertilizers and pesticides. Not only does such an achievement contribute to the alleviation of poverty and starvation, but also it fuels socioeconomic development.

  本文雅思7分写作班介绍的两个写作逻辑公式,希望同学们灵活熟练掌握,雅思考试都可轻松斩获高分。





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