如何巧用你身边熟悉的素材来写8+范文,“全面的”不同说法赶紧摘抄下来吧

2018年07月22日 无忧小雅哥




7月7日的A类题目是讲education的


到底是课内教育重要还是课外教育重要


又是一个to what extent的问题


Education相信是学生们比较熟悉的话题


今天要教大家


如何巧用身边熟悉的例子


阐述成一段8+的论证


2018.07.07 

IELTS A Task 2


Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Teachers are thought of as the laying foundations of learning. Some people believe that school and university students learn far more from classrooms with teachers than from alternative sources; a view with which I agree only to a small extent as in my opinion, holistic learning comes from both teachers and other sources. 


On the one hand, teachers provide a physical mode of learning to students as they enable face to face communication. Teachers teach via practical examples allowing young minds to learn not only theories but also application of such theories. For example, in a chemistry class in school, the teacher will demonstrate the different chemical reactions from distinct concoctions to explain the various concepts of acids and bases that students will find easy to follow and understand comprehensively. Additionally, teachers allow students the ability to cross question providing them with the opportunity to clarify any doubts that may arise on the spot while learning a particular topic. 


However, other sources such as the internet and television provide a wide range of information that is beyond human capacity. Such sources enable students to gain extensive knowledge on any topic that they may be interested in without any barriers to learning. For instance, university students are able to research on specific topics ranging from medicine, engineering, business and economics to fashion, through several papers, articles, interview videos and talks on the internet as well as the TV, allowing them to learn much more than in classrooms. As a result, these other sources become complementary methods of learning alongside classes with teachers. 


In conclusion, I agree to a small degree only with the belief that pupils learn more from teachers in classrooms than from other sources as both the modes support each other for well-rounded learning.  



同样是表示全面的学习,

范文中就用了三种不同的词汇


Holistic

adj. 整体的;全盘的

We need to take a more holistic approach to improving our schools.


Comprehensively

adv. 包括地;全面地

Candidates must pass a rigorous and comprehensive examination, which has three parts and spans two days.


Well-rounded

adj. (身体;形状等) 丰满的;成熟的;全面的

She describes herself as a "well-rounded individual" who works hard but has a varied social life.

同学们还不赶紧把这些词汇摘抄下来


Complementary

adj. 补充的;互补的

She wore a new outfit with a complementary scarf.

My spouse and I have complementary goals.


Concoction

n. 混合;调合;调合物;捏造

With such unusual ingredients, the chef will be challenged to create a gourmet concoction in thirty minutes.


On the spot

当场; 在现场; 马上

The murderer was overtaken in his crime on the spot.


Allowing sb. to,

使得某人

一个非常加分的连接词

The window to a balcony was open, allowing in a cool night breeze that made the fire in the hearth dance.



范文中举的例子


化学课上的化学实验


大学里offer的各种课程


都是大家学校生活中会碰到的内容


我们现在要学的就是


如何把这些简单的,常见的例子


写清楚,写地道


这篇范文就给大家很好的示范




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