科学和艺术哪个重要?高频ESSAY真题行文思路指南。

2018年11月14日 7PLUS英语


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今天的我们为了节省大家的时间也是废话不多说,马上来看作文解析。

 

题目:Some people argue that science is more important than arts. What is your opinion? 科学和艺术哪个更重要?

 

首先关于这个题目,我们先来分析一下arts这个题目的关键词。牛津字典对arts的定义是:

The various branches of creative activity, such as painting, music,literature, and dance.

 

其实也就是笼统的艺术类学科,包括绘画、音乐、表演、文学等。所以大家从任何一个arts的分支来谈都成立。

 

对于这一题,建议大家就一边倒,要么完全支持science,要么完全支持arts。最好是选择你自己的专业的领域,这样因为比较熟悉会写的更多。那么两边都包括什么论点呢?

 

Science

Arts

Science promotes technological advancement.

科学推动科技进步。

Arts is beneficial for cultural heritage.

艺术对于文化传承有益。

Science boosts productivity.

科学促进生产力。

Arts improves quality of life.

艺术提高生活品质。

Scientific process expands our knowledge of the universe.

科学的过程是扩充我们对宇宙的认知。

Arts provides emotional gratification.

艺术提供精神满足。

Science invents medical procedures to expand human’s life.

科学发明医疗措施来延长人类寿命。


 

总体来看science都是很实际而arts会比较偏精神层面。我们看来对于大多数的同学来说,还是science会比较好写一些,因为有许多许多实例可以拿出来具体谈。然而想要支持arts,需要基础好一点的同学在论述观点的过程中说的清楚明确一些,而且许多关于emotional的单词都是一些比较抽象的概念,大家或许都不是很熟悉。

 

因此,为大多数同学着想,我们的例文观点也是支持science

 

例文:

It is undeniable that both science and arts are two critical aspects of human society. Some people believe that science is more important than arts,where as opponents frown upon such idea. In my opinion, I believe that science is more important than arts.

 

First, science contributes to the increase of productivity, which cannot be achieved by arts. In other words, scientists and engineers have designed and developed machines in almost all industries to replace human force and accelerate manufacturing processes. For example, a recent study by Royal Melbourne Institute of Technology reported that the mechanisation in textile industry have increased 60% manufacturing productivity during the past ten years.

 

Another reason making science more important is that science, rather than arts, promotes technological advancement. This is a rather evident statement as some science subjects, including applied physics and computing sciences, pave the path for the emergence and development of cell phones and the internet. According to a 2015 Australian survey, the penetration of electronic devices in Victoria was up to 70% in 2014. That is to say, electronic devices changed the way people communicate and interact. As a result, the development of technology is a beneficial result of science.

 

In conclusion, science is more important than arts because science increases productivity and promotes the development of technology. In order to further promote science, governments and universities should devote sufficient funding,and the public awareness should be raised to encourage scientific advancements.



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